You can't say "Oh tell me my friend why this life is full of suffer", you can say "Oh tell me my friend why this life is full of suffering" which is bound to break both the size and the rhyme. But I do see what you are saying.
I will try to work on it for the next iteration, if and when I decide to put one together:)
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Date: 2010-04-04 01:24 am (UTC)I will try to work on it for the next iteration, if and when I decide to put one together:)
Thanks! :)