http://dikayasobaka.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dikayasobaka.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dikayasobaka 2009-11-23 05:28 am (UTC)

Ты совершенно прав - рифма таки сбита. Ритм вроде как выдержан.

Мне просто нравится, как оно так звучит:)
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