Bor', etu stat'ju ya by tozhe ne vzyala, tol'ko ty ne obizhajsya. Lyudi ishut konkretiki, a ne rassuzhdenij abstraktnyh. Opyat' zhe, skazat', chto racism amoralen i bigotry - vesh' nehoroshaya, malo. I nad yazykom nado rabotat'. Russkij u tebya gorazdo sil'nee (tol'ko ne bej menya nogami, ya zh kak luchshe hochu). Vot, recomenduyu Legal Writing Style (second edition) by Henry Weihofen http://search.barnesandnoble.com/booksearch/isbnInquiry.asp?userid=rs2qIJhB4p&isbn=0829920668&TXT=Y&itm=1

Obyazatel'no prochti i primi k svedeniyu. Budesh' luchshe pisat', tochno. Ty ne smotri na nazvanie, ono nichego ne znachit. Prosto kniga konkretno pomogaet pisat' luchshe.